Not bad~ But for my opinion... for the enter page, the btm part... did u try to make as gradient? the line for me is too hard... If your 'Introduction...' was above the line.. then it can be a holder.. but you put at btm.. feel like you wan to show something on that line
1st page really classy, like the feel.. the close button is too sharp to c... its too outstanding from the other button.. dun angry har... just a little comment thr
nice 1 nic, i macam can see u apply the skill u use to do the Chipster in ur 2nd layout, hehe. Just 1 thing, like wat jerry said, the Close button might not necessary, u can try use a smaller "X" ,because last time when doin allen flash, he told me b4 dun put the CLose btn too big and obvious, if feels like direct users to go and click . Just a suggestion bro =)
but i dun like ur second layout. lol ! I think it's bcz ur word "violin" is abit too big and the "close" also.. hmmm, like asking ppl to click the "close" rather than other buttons. haha !
Not bad~
ReplyDeleteBut for my opinion... for the enter page, the btm part... did u try to make as gradient? the line for me is too hard... If your 'Introduction...' was above the line.. then it can be a holder.. but you put at btm.. feel like you wan to show something on that line
Dun angry ar~ juz my opinion..
1 word classy....
ReplyDelete1st page is very classic and nice layout. 2nd page. may be to consider do u need more than 1 violin to appear on screen-look a bit unbalance.
ReplyDeletehor. u are dead. i'm very angry now. >.<
ReplyDeleteThe bottom part is a solid color with Overlay i think. so ur suggestion was to place the "intro" on top of the line a? can, i'll giv it a try. thx~
do u really need the close button??
ReplyDeletelike u telling ppl pls close the page...
1st page really classy, like the feel..
ReplyDeletethe close button is too sharp to c...
its too outstanding from the other button..
dun angry har... just a little comment thr
nice 1 nic, i macam can see u apply the skill u use to do the Chipster in ur 2nd layout, hehe. Just 1 thing, like wat jerry said, the Close button might not necessary, u can try use a smaller "X" ,because last time when doin allen flash, he told me b4 dun put the CLose btn too big and obvious, if feels like direct users to go and click . Just a suggestion bro =)
ReplyDeletei suka ini jugak, classy !
ReplyDeletebut i dun like ur second layout. lol ! I think it's bcz ur word "violin" is abit too big and the "close" also.. hmmm, like asking ppl to click the "close" rather than other buttons. haha !
got APR2 student come comment also oo!! thx very much!
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